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I need some feedback on this poem before I turn it in.

its supposed to be about utopian/dystopian society but I dont know ...

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I need some feedback on this poem before I turn it in.

its supposed to be about utopian/dystopian society but I dont know if its any good or even makes sense XD : "Reality is a lovely place, yet I still don't enjoy its lifeless company Im still looking for a special world A world where no one lives on spidery strings As mistreated marionetts being controlled by un-named hands Hatred and Misery are not part of this imaginary place She with frayed wires discovered Wheather she be sinner or saint, she found a state Where no roaches and rumors roamed our lives Here, bodies aren't leftovers of human's hopeless minds We all live happily and for a true purpose However, the best part of it all is that It's admired that your idea of perfection differs from mine.

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I like it!
I think you portrayed your theme well.

Virtual Teaching Assistant: Heather L.
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Upload Date: 5/31/2017

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